I haven't been working that much in this, because I still can't really brain now, but bear with me.
To fortuna and Oni-Gil. I have used the names of your characters just for the purpose of not overloading my tired brain, I wrote here what I need those characters to do and be, etc. If you don't mind what I have (admitedly it's not that much) then I won't change the names, if you do mind it, I'll change the names and backgrounds completely so there is no similarity to your own characters.
Most of this is for me alone, just to keep my notes somewhat together, skip over the senseless or boring.

 

That Superhero Stuff

 

STORY SKETCHES

There are meanings, and uses to those meanings. I want to find them. (captain)

 

If you look hard enough, you’ll find the road to the colorful sky, which opens at twilight (Adell)

 

Why is the road to the colorful sky blocked? (Captain, Cult)

 

CHARACTERS

Captain-

 Alias- Damian,

Real name-Alana,

Age-28 y.o.,

Height- 1.85 m.,

Ethnicity- Russo-Italian,

 Religion-catholic

Languages Known- Native-Russian, 2^nd -English, 3^rd - Italian (not much)

Eyes- Gray-green

Skin- No tan

Spent years 5-12 in an institution, escaped at 12 when she and her siblings burned it down, she, Ellea, and Dennis lived together for 2 years until Dennis went mad and fell in love with her, then tried to kill her. They escaped and she adopted the name of Damian to throw off Dennis. She and Ellea lived together until she was 18-19, she then moved to another continent alone

When going evil she takes the name of Damian (which until then is like a nickname, mostly people call her ‘she’) but when going mad she goes back to her real name

She desires to be a hero to give worth and meaning to her life, so much that she thinks if she really succeeds at that, she will have atoned for everything else.

Ellea-

Age-32 y.o.

Height- 1.85 m.

Religion- Orthodox Christian

Is perfectly fluid in 4 languages- Russian, English, French and Mandarin Chinese

Was freed from the institution where she was being captive by Adell, a mysterious young man who turned out to be her cousin. He trained her and helped her save her other siblings. Unfortunately, soon Adell’s theories about her and her siblings turned true and one by one, Alana, Dennis, and Annia started losing their sanity and developing strange powers that seemed like ESP.

They were attacked and lost Annia to the people who wanted to catch them, they escaped and Adell had to leave. Dennis went insane and Ellea had to leave him behind. Left with only Alana, she tried to raise her as best she could. A few years later Alana started receiving shoes boxes and Ellea knew Dennis had found them. They hid, but Dennis always managed to find them after a few months.

Alana then left, saying that she didn’t want to interfere with her life and wanted to make sure she was safe in the event that she couldn’t control her latent madness. She kept in touch, through letters and other things like postcards and newspapers cut-outs.

She met with Adell and helped him investigate the cult until Adell was murdered. Someone forced him to kill himself, but he left her a cryptic message about the sky that only Alana can understand.

Dennis-

Height- 1.87m.

Age- 29 y.o.

Is completely crazy, in love with Damian, wants to kill her. He’s the one that buys Damian all those shoes.

Religion- Occultist Priest

Annia-

Age- 20 y.o.

Height- 1.78 m.

Is a crazy sadist. Desires only to destroy her siblings. Captain's youngest sister

Religion- Witch

Darina

Vampire

Age- 74 y.o.

Height- 1.70 m.

Religion- Undefined Christian (vampire=Christian mythos/curse)

Was sold by her family to pay for protection from the vampire who had already killed many of them. The vampire turned her, but the moment she found enough strength to fight back, she destroyed him and fled away. She settled in a different continent, quickly building fame and power as companion and bodyguard of the rich and powerful. She got a pack of young vampires who work for her and leads most of the government’s illegal business. She’s still angry at her parents and routinely kills parents who she thinks mistreat their childrens. She has a soft spot for childrens, and thus cannot really bring herself to attack Jailbait seriously, so she gets back at Damian.

Eryl

Hair: long, curled, blonde, with big bows

               Height: 1.68 m.

               Eyes: Clear Blue

               Skin: white

               Age: Almost 19

Profession- Owns discos, high boutiques, banquet services, and hotels

Religion- None

Whiny brat obsessed with dolls who always got what she wanted, she was so spoiled that when her father (her mother died at childbirth) refused to give her a real girl to play dolls with, she killed him and made it look like an accident. Then she took over all her father’s business and did as she pleased, ultimately kidnapping women and men and turning them into dolls, some alive, some dead, she keeps them all in an underground dungeon.

Kairn

Age- 26-27

Height- 1.85 m

Skin- White

Profession- Assassin

Ethnicity- Unknown- part American, part something else

Religion- None, has ESP

Is a two timing bastard who works as a double spy for both the underground cult and the police/good guys. His loyalties shift as it pleases him, but he is the best there is, and once bought he can do anything he’s hired for, torture, kidnapping, spying, assassination, thievery, etc.

 

Jailbait

Age- 16

Height- 1.68 m

Skin- Tanned

Profession- Highschool student

Orphan.

Studies at Blackhill high (mascot, the mountain cat), is two years behind, so she’s …uh, whatever passes for 1o Preparatoria there, can’t brain now. Think it means she’s, what, a freshman?

Wants- to find love and make herself known to the world as a way to find the strength that society’s hatred and coldness robbed from her.

 

Eternity

Age- 25

Height- 1.70

Profession- College Chemistry teacher

Religion- None (Does Science counts?...hmm, maybe Scientology, lol!)

Real Name- Enna

Ethnicity- English by her biological mother, American by her adoptive parents.

Her mother gave her up for adoption at birth to a couple of college teachers, who couldn’t have kids. She lived with them until her mother died from unknown causes, she was 15 at the time. Her father became obsessed because he thought she had been murdered because of what she knew and searched for the asassins for 8 years, when he also died after falling from his office’s window. Eternity knows that both her parents were murdered, but since she knows that she’s being watched she pretends to not know anything. In secret she goes out at night in disguise to search for clues as to what her parents were searching for and caused them to be killed.

She never cared much for her biological mother, and loved her parents very much, she wants to be the best at everything she can to honor their memories.

 

WORLDBUILDING NOTES

Urban fantasy- demons, vampires, werewolves, voodoo, witches

THEMES

Atonement

Sacrifice

The worth of a life

PLOT NOTES

Villains-

Darina, Kairn, Eryl

Catalysts-

Captain, Dennis, Annia

Heroes-

Ellea,